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Inner Demons...







I tried.







I failed.







I got up.







I tried again.







Repeat







I keep my head down.







I ignore the stare I know are there.







I hear them talking behind me.







They don't think I can.







But I can.







My books are knocked down.







Laughing is heard.







An evil inside of me stirred.







My inner demon awakened.







I bet they see me now







Talon's and wings.







May not be seen.







But a demon nonetheless.







A growl and a swipe.







Can you see me now?!







Or do I have to show my inner demons?







To late.







The girl you knew is gone.












Possibly my worst poem yet. I'm sorry for filling your eyes with this piece of-

Alice: AJ! Stop dissing your stuff! Its fine!
AJ: Screw you Alice.
Alice: *Maka chop to the face*
AJ: My face!
Alice: Screw you AJ.

Whatever. I hate my writings. I don't see them as good. Or anything close to awesome. Meh. Whatever.
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TheOfficialQueen Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice! It was exiting to read :3
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FallenAngel1001 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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SoubisAngel Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
i love it!! and i relate to it remember your your own worst critic
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FallenAngel1001 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks I will.
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NeoSolus Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great ending. :)
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FallenAngel1001 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you liked it. I tried to give it my whole 'snapped' ending thing.
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0L50NJ4 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
well, I think it's quite excellent.
and sadly your worst is my best lol ;-)!
If I wrote something like this then it would be One Of the BEST pieces I'd written ;-)
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firefox939 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*runs off to draw the pic*
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FallenAngel1001 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Coolio~
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TheBipolarDollMaker Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually, I like this poem....There's something about it that draws my interest....I'm not sure what.
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